You're a fine poet (you should try it more when you're not limited to the words in the little magnetic kit!) - you've written what makes good poetry: honest and visceral. Rings true and resonates. Exactly what poetry should do.

My particular favorites:
. The first two lines of the first poem.
. The third poem.
. This line: "I sacrifice language to desire"
. The last poem.

Rock on!
Chris