Sunday Snippet

[clevermanka]

It was A Week, but I still wrote.

I finally got to Good Intentions' raciest scene (some heavy petting described in vague terms 😆).

Zhao Yunlan brought his lips close to Shen Wei’s ear. “Have you ever done it?” he whispered.

“No,” Shen Wei breathed back. “Have you?”

Zhao Yunlan nodded, his cheek brushing Shen Wei’s. “Yeah.”

With whom? How often? The questions sunk a stone of inadequacy into Shen Wei’s stomach.

“I don’t…” he started.

“Oh, no, we’re definitely not doing it at camp,” Zhao Yunlan whispered, laughing. “Don’t worry. But…” He broke off, making a small, pained noise and the warmth of his hand disappeared. He shifted under Shen Wei’'s arm, and huffed a short laugh before his hand found Shen Wei's. He squeezed it and Shen Wei’s heart thumped hard at the realization that his hand had just adjusted his...his—“But if you decide you wanna, sometime after we go home. If you can make it into the city, maybe stay with me for the weekend or something?”

Comments

[wrote_and_writ]

Oh no, babies! ❤️

[clevermanka]

So awkward and earnest! 🧡

[minoanmiss]

You still wrote!! You have Created! Go you!

[clevermanka]

Go, me!

[naye]

THESE BOYS I AM HAVING SO MANY FEELINGS!! ♥♥♥ Poor Shen Wei! Don't worry baby Zhao Yunlan is definitely not going to find you inadequate.

[clevermanka]

He definitely won't, but poor Shen Wei'll have to wait a decade to find that out...

[naye]

OH NO Shen Wei baby...!!!

[clevermanka]

It's so weird and sad writing this story when I know I can't give them the happy ending I want to! I'm trying to make the angst as not-awful as I can, but I mean we know what happens in Hellbent...

[naye]

Mmmmmmm, so many good things happen...!

[umadoshi]

Oh, sweet boys. ;_;

[clevermanka]

They're so sweet and I'm breaking their hearts 😭

[no_detective]

The questions sunk a stone of inadequacy into Shen Wei’s stomach. - what a great line!

[clevermanka]

Thank you!

[tinny]

Yay for the writing muse powering through! <3

I love how Shen Wei is unable to put "things" into words. :D So cute!

[clevermanka]

I don't know that it was the muse powering through or my hauling her around by the ear, but we're getting there!