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clevermanka) wrote2019-10-27 07:45 am
clevermanka) wrote2019-10-27 07:45 am
Sunday Snippet
Here's a piece of The Sex Scene That Nearly Killed Me (or at least nearly killed my desire to continue writing, ugh).
Shen Wei had gotten shockingly strong and Zhao Yunlan’s dick was definitely getting with the program. “Yes,” he sighed. The word turned into a hiss as sharp pressure bit into his inner thigh. He flinched from the discomfort even as his hips thrust up in encouragement. The belt and scarf held him nearly still. Whining, he twisted away and into the sensation. Bratty, he tried to press himself closer to the toy again.
In an instant, he was hauled up by the lapels of his jacket. It was just a few centimeters, but his breath left in a shocked exhale. His head tipped back, and his eyes flew open. He blinked a few times before registering the discomfort of his shoulders hovering a bit above the cushions, and the wrists still pinned above his head. He whined, for real this time. He was pretty sure he could break free if he really wanted, but Shen Wei didn’t let go and Zhao Yunlan didn’t want him to.
Gonna start the next scene this morning (where significantly less pleasant stuff happens to our intrepid heroes). Wish us all luck.
I am highly motivated by music and also a very organizationally-inclined person. This explains the cough thirty-eight playlists on my YouTube channel (most of those are fanvid playlists tho). If anyone's interested in checking out what I listen to when I'm writing my smutty-smut, here you go.
Shen Wei had gotten shockingly strong and Zhao Yunlan’s dick was definitely getting with the program. “Yes,” he sighed. The word turned into a hiss as sharp pressure bit into his inner thigh. He flinched from the discomfort even as his hips thrust up in encouragement. The belt and scarf held him nearly still. Whining, he twisted away and into the sensation. Bratty, he tried to press himself closer to the toy again.
In an instant, he was hauled up by the lapels of his jacket. It was just a few centimeters, but his breath left in a shocked exhale. His head tipped back, and his eyes flew open. He blinked a few times before registering the discomfort of his shoulders hovering a bit above the cushions, and the wrists still pinned above his head. He whined, for real this time. He was pretty sure he could break free if he really wanted, but Shen Wei didn’t let go and Zhao Yunlan didn’t want him to.
Gonna start the next scene this morning (where significantly less pleasant stuff happens to our intrepid heroes). Wish us all luck.
I am highly motivated by music and also a very organizationally-inclined person. This explains the cough thirty-eight playlists on my YouTube channel (most of those are fanvid playlists tho). If anyone's interested in checking out what I listen to when I'm writing my smutty-smut, here you go.
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♥ ♥ ♥
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he twisted away and into the sensation
I love how this describes the physicality of wanting both more stimulation and less at the same time - beautiful!
Shen Wei didn’t let go and Zhao Yunlan didn’t want him to.
I AM SO EXCITED TO READ THIS
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I especially love this bit: Bratty, he tried to press himself closer to the toy again. In an instant, he was hauled up by the lapels of his jacket. It was just a few centimeters, but his breath left in a shocked exhale. His head tipped back, and his eyes flew open.
*Whistles*
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thank you for sharing the playlist! (if you don't mind, may i rec tanerélle? i discovered her very recently, and she hits some very specific buttons in my lizard brain. i think you might like her too :D)
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