The Rec Center primer for Guardian

Here's what I've got to send to Elizabeth and Gav for The Rec Center if anyone wants to give me some thoughts on it. I'll probably send it when I'm back home on Wednesday.

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Critical Role (just a primer): https://tinyletter.com/elizabethandgav/letters/the-rec-center-74

Haikyuu!! primer + recs: https://tinyletter.com/elizabethandgav/letters/the-rec-center-72

YOI primer + recs: https://tinyletter.com/elizabethandgav/letters/the-rec-center-48

Women's soccer rpf recs + primer: https://tinyletter.com/elizabethandgav/letters/the-rec-center-33

Wynonna Earp primer: https://tinyletter.com/elizabethandgav/letters/the-rec-center-30

IDK why those aren't staying under the cut. I really dislike the way DW displays the cut tag in the Rich Text editor view.The only thing worse is the HTML view where it's all just one big giant paragraph with br tags thrown in. *shudder*

Sunday Six

So I guess since I'm, like, a writer now, I can jump on this train.

solo is beta-ing for me again (bless!) and pointed out (probably accurately, because she is correct about everything else so far) that my sex scenes lean heavily on choreography instead of feelings and I should ramp up the emotional response if I want to write hotter porn. Y'all. sigh I am so very terrible at emotions. But at least I'm more comfortable applying them to fictional characters than I am to real life stuff so this shouldn't be tough? (Narrator: It was tough)

Since I am not going to post my current, feeble, as-yet unbeta'd attempts at Blowjob Emotions (solo , I apologize in advance, you might have more fixing to do in the second draft but I'm trying), have some first touches after waaaay too many years of pining.

Their bodies are pressed tight from shoulders to knees and he feels Zhao Yunlan’s hardness and heat against him. A jolt runs the length of his body and this isn’t going to last long. He needs to slow down, he needs to calm down, he needs—Zhao Yunlan’s hand suddenly at his crotch and he gasps, squirming away to escape the slight and overwhelming pressure.

Zhao Yunlan’s mouth slides away from his with the movement, but it doesn’t lessen the intensity of the connection. He seems only half aware that Shen Wei moved at all as he mutters into his hair.

“Want you, need you, I need you so much Shen Wei,” he whispers into his hairline. “Do you have any idea? Do you want me this much?

SIGNS  POINT  TO  YES, ZHAO  YUNLAN.

I leave for the airport in about four hours. Depending on my energy levels (and my mother's) I might be online a lot or very little while I'm in Indianapolis. If I don't respond to comments in a timely manner, trust me it's not you, it's me.